Thursday, November 26, 2009

At the Void Deck

By AY
Introduction/Orientation
This picture depicts a scene at the void deck of a block of flats.
The void deck is a place to do our own quiet activities, hold special events or just to meet up with friends.

Body
There are two very inconsiderate boys kicking ball at the void deck. One boy kicked the ball too hard and it has gone out of control.

The boys look in horror as the ball was sent flying to an elderly man sitting behind them reading the newspaper.

The man looks very shocked when the ball hits his face and knocks his glasses off his face.

If I were him, I would be very angry with the two boys and start to scold them.

Another elderly man with a walking stick glared at the two boys and is pointing to a sign that shows that playing was prohibited in the void deck.

Two other men at the side who were playing chess stopped their game and frowned at the two boys.

If I were one of the boys, I would apologise immediately to the old man reading the newspaper. I would also help to pick up his glasses and promise not to play ball games at the void deck again,

Conclusion
To conclude, I think that whenever we are at a public place, we should always be more considerate to others.

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